We worked with a student on a consistent basis for the entirety of her last year of university. She was studying for a degree in Child Protection. To one particular essay of 2,300 words, we made a total of 492 revisions.

Below are three excerpts from the essay which show the edits we made.

Excerpt 1

An example of undergraduate essay editing

Excerpt 2

Excerpt 3

An example of undergraduate essay editing

As can be seen in the excerpts above, we made multiple amendments, which are shown in purple colour.

Essentially, we deleted and replaced words and added in missing words to make the sentences more academic and comprehensible.

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